ext_306486 ([identity profile] shanmonster.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] elanya 2004-09-10 01:25 pm (UTC)

On a cursory glance....

"Alot of proffs seem quite pleased..."
"...am not at a level whenre I can really traipse off..."
"There has been some, however, and also some arcaheology of pirate ships..."
"How cool would *that* be!""this includes all kinds of exciting historical stuff on microfiche."
"...a record of everything publised..."
"...and how cool is *that*!"
"...get off my but..."

Also, most of your uses of the word "that" are extraneous, and quite a few of your sentences use substandard grammatical structure (eg. "That guy being Charles Evans, and his compilation being the Evans Bibliography, and the collections being called Early American Imprints, or something like that.").

In regards to the post itself, very cool! It looks like you're onto something. Good luck!

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